Well..my story..actually my aim is to keep it simple and easy..
But for those people who didn’t come across my story genre..split personalities..may find it difficult to figure out what am i writing..and i don really know how to convey that mysterious mood in my writing..
I was told to make my stakes higher..such as having some dead man or blood etc..but i dont really like bloody and violence thingys happening in my story..or esle it will even make my story more hard to understand..maybe i should think of other ways to place my stakes higher
